Villanelle (based off of Clannad)

i made this for english a month or two ago and i guess i'll post it.
it has specific rhyme schemes and shit like that soo. yeah i know it sucks
and i know that it might not be 100% accurate but i needed rhymes haha.
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There wasn’t very much that you could do
Her frail body was at the end of life
Soon your happiness will turn to grey rue

Whenever you met, your friendship was true
Did you know you’d soon be husband and wife?
There wasn’t very much that you could do

As time went by, your undying love grew
You were so close, both your feelings were rife
Soon your happiness will turn to grey rue

When the streets turned white, your dear wife was due
Your screaming was like an out-of-tune fife
There wasn’t very much that you could do

And she never did see her kid get through
For now your child ended your cold strife
Soon your happiness will turn to grey rue

Your poor baby never made it to two
After that your world ended with a knife
There wasn’t very much you could do
Soon your happiness will turn to grey rue

I really like this : D
Also, you like Angel Beats? That's awesome :3

thanks ^^

yes -- love the avvie btw~ he's so cute omg

thats good c: